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He should probably run into at least one or two more characters on shore, perhaps police or coast guard officers, or better yet the coroner chick! She could be not only a smart, sexy chick, but an ass-kicking, mutant killer as well! As for the other characters....Karen, should, in my opinion, stick around till the end, but she should die in a heroic fashion as a sort of payment for all her inequities, especially in connection with her part in domination the murder domination of (sorry I forget domination her name at the moment). Jennifer should die for sure, but not until late in the story. These are just some of the suggestions I can think of at the moment. Whatever you decide to do, I can assure you I'll be there to offer my criticism. ;) Happy writing! Oh, your discs should probably be there by now, too. Submitted by SilvrWolf (user info) at 2004-09-24 12:21:06 (#) Ranking: 0 engine13, ask and you shall receive.
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